No Gender, No Guise, No Name

No Gender, No Guise, No Name

A Poem by DeathByChoice

 

Circuit of lies beneath

Oil and a greasy slick

Yellow bone mounts putrid skin and

Thick blood flows through wire

Under the eye.

As the treacherous monster

Skulks about the darkness

In fear of the beauty of life.


Close your eyes in hope

Breathless gasps coat

The air in such seriousness

And professionalism

Silence floats among you

Choking off the jugular and staining

The skin with burn

To remain


Embraced in a leech's lips

Softened with silken fallacies

In need of a nectar so sweet

Of poisonous pleasures retained

Deceit within an honest mind

filled with strangeness unsure

Through care-full curse is violent

As trickery stains the soul


Eyes made of liquid lies

Lips tainted with perfidious rest

Words slipped to fool the soul

Drop 'till the very last breath

© 2010 DeathByChoice


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I love this! So, deep and dark, nothing is cut off from it. It is clear that emotion is heightened in this piece, and uninhibited. This poem is fantastic...great work = ]

Brittany

Posted 9 Years Ago


Honestly, it was just that I heard the word circuit in English class and then the first line popped into my head and the rest just followed. It was done in about a minute and a half :P

Posted 9 Years Ago


i love it. what were you thinking about when you wrote it? What inspired it, if you don't mind me asking? Merely curious is all.

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is poetic genius, great poem :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Love it. Perfection.

Posted 9 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very well written and amazing flow! Loved it!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


It's very beautiful and well written. It has a lot of mood and emotion behind it. It just flows very well. 8D

Posted 9 Years Ago


*abbie
100/100

Posted 9 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I agree it was very well written! I like how everything is set up tooo!
kudoz too you

-abie:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


very well written

Posted 9 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Name: Megan Dorothy Age: 16 Sexual Orientation: Bisexual Religion: Atheist Classifications: Emotional. Dark. Doesn't always play well with others. Quiet. Bipolar. Imaginative. Secluded. Independan.. more..

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