No Gender, No Guise, No Name

No Gender, No Guise, No Name

A Poem by DeathByChoice


Circuit of lies beneath

Oil and a greasy slick

Yellow bone mounts putrid skin and

Thick blood flows through wire

Under the eye.

As the treacherous monster

Skulks about the darkness

In fear of the beauty of life.

Close your eyes in hope

Breathless gasps coat

The air in such seriousness

And professionalism

Silence floats among you

Choking off the jugular and staining

The skin with burn

To remain

Embraced in a leech's lips

Softened with silken fallacies

In need of a nectar so sweet

Of poisonous pleasures retained

Deceit within an honest mind

filled with strangeness unsure

Through care-full curse is violent

As trickery stains the soul

Eyes made of liquid lies

Lips tainted with perfidious rest

Words slipped to fool the soul

Drop 'till the very last breath

© 2010 DeathByChoice

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I love this! So, deep and dark, nothing is cut off from it. It is clear that emotion is heightened in this piece, and uninhibited. This poem is fantastic...great work = ]


Posted 10 Years Ago

Honestly, it was just that I heard the word circuit in English class and then the first line popped into my head and the rest just followed. It was done in about a minute and a half :P

Posted 10 Years Ago

i love it. what were you thinking about when you wrote it? What inspired it, if you don't mind me asking? Merely curious is all.

Posted 10 Years Ago

This is poetic genius, great poem :)

Posted 10 Years Ago

Love it. Perfection.

Posted 10 Years Ago

0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very well written and amazing flow! Loved it!!

Posted 10 Years Ago

It's very beautiful and well written. It has a lot of mood and emotion behind it. It just flows very well. 8D

Posted 10 Years Ago


Posted 10 Years Ago

0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I agree it was very well written! I like how everything is set up tooo!
kudoz too you


Posted 10 Years Ago

very well written

Posted 10 Years Ago

0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on October 24, 2010
Last Updated on October 25, 2010



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