The Mourning Arises

The Mourning Arises

A Poem by Tracey C.
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It's a post-death poem

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What lies behind these eyes
is a secret kept 'til my demise
When i'm sewn up, flushed and still
Remember my voice
'cause it gives you chills
A haunting day
With a parade of black
To reassure my lifes contract
With death himself as he lurks about,
He touches you all to take you out
So reap what i sew, or sew what i've reaped
My thoughts have been in hiding
But it's up to you to seek

© 2013 Tracey C.


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Beautiful mystery behind this piece and I really enjoyed it!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tracey C.

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much! Glad you enjoy it =)
I love the flow of it! Great job, honestly.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tracey C.

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much! I am happy you like it =D
Dark and mysterious...great write!
~Tasha

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tracey C.

11 Years Ago

Thanks! Hope you enjoyed it! =)
 Tasha

11 Years Ago

You're welcome I did =]
i really like this poem.it's dark and mysterious... great poem.


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tracey C.

11 Years Ago

Thank you, I am glad you like it. =)
Vanessa van Gersie

11 Years Ago

:) You are welcome
oooo this is a bit creepy and mysterious. I like this a lot. But now I want to know your secret that lies behind your eyes :) Nicely written.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tracey C.

11 Years Ago

Thank you! I like to make things mysterious =) And you may never know xD
Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Haha true. Well it was a good read.
Tracey C.

11 Years Ago

Thanks you!
It flows nicely. i like it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tracey C.

11 Years Ago

Thank you, very much!
A I like this poem especially the ending...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tracey C.

11 Years Ago

Thank You! Much Appreciated!
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

You are welcome...
Awesome poem, once again. ;) The flow and word choice were excellent! (:

100/100

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tracey C.

11 Years Ago

why thank you ;D
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AK
Wow! Great poem :) I love the way you've portrayed these emotions! Your choice of words is exquisite. Keep writing!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tracey C.

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much =) I appreciate your review.
AK

11 Years Ago

:) my pleasure!

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