Emptiness

Emptiness

A Poem by Mystik

The emptiness, the darkness, I feel so much pain
The lies, deceit. All around me is utter disdain
My heart hurts so much and I feel loneliness inside
I feel lost, without hope and with no one to confide
The emptiness is taunting me every day and night
It cuts so deep, it feels there is no hope in sight
I don't know why no matter what it just won't go away
This feeling of emptiness burning within me causing decay
The emptiness is much more than a void in my heart
It's been there so long, from the inside it's tearing me apart
I am in great agony and affliction lurks in my dreams
It may  be with me forever within , is how it seems

© 2012 Mystik


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Deep seeded pain can be the worst for most people depending on the source of it. Great poem. I like the way you've conveyed the deepth of how pain has taken it's emotional toll on a person's spiritual well being. Great write. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Mystik

11 Years Ago

Thank you :)

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Added on September 7, 2012
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