WOW...Mysty, you are hot right now! Every poem I read of yours is awesome. As for me, I totally get it. The one I wrote has a similar message "What Daddy Does Not Say". My father was physically present. If you can call it that he was a workaholic so not really there. Though, I do admire him for his ability to provide for his family. I am rambling. Anyway, emotionally we didn't connect. The scar of not feeling loved by a man is on me...real or imagined. Yes, I have pushed some men away because of my past. Love the ending "run if you see me coming"....ridiculously hilarious to me.
Virtual orphans with extraordinary eyes are in fact MORE lovable, as you know from some certain spontaneous verse.
There is a zone free of the typical rise and fall. It is the Eye of the Storm. It is Love Itself.
Our usual born selves are caught in a realm of cause and effect. There is an acausal grace at the heart of breathing. This still point of the turning worlds gives us a Clearing with which to deal with our daily lives.
This poem is a lovely poignant confession nonetheless.
I have to say Mysty that my own dad left when I was a child, so I understand this
poem so very well. I also don't have my mom in my life, so for such a long time,
I wondered what the hell was wrong with me, if my mom and dad can't love me,
then who will.
I delt with that insecurity most of my life, and I finally after really
learning myself as a person, I learned to love myself, even though I
know I'm not perfect.
I don't know you personally, but you seem very lovable to me...like a
cozy hug:). If you ever need to talk, please feel free to leave me a PM.
no no no
Don't say that
Your last line is soo sad... everyone is lovable expecially the ones who don't think so......It was such a good read though....like all your stuff
Cheers,lea
Damn girl, you are NOT unlovable, but I know exactly how you feel!! I feel the same! They leave and/or die.
I've often said it, 'if you see me coming, fun'! lol honest to goodness.
I've had my share of tormoil with my own father. I love him but he has his vices.
I'm glad you can share your emotions through your writing! Keep it up!!
WOW...Mysty, you are hot right now! Every poem I read of yours is awesome. As for me, I totally get it. The one I wrote has a similar message "What Daddy Does Not Say". My father was physically present. If you can call it that he was a workaholic so not really there. Though, I do admire him for his ability to provide for his family. I am rambling. Anyway, emotionally we didn't connect. The scar of not feeling loved by a man is on me...real or imagined. Yes, I have pushed some men away because of my past. Love the ending "run if you see me coming"....ridiculously hilarious to me.
How do you know you are not lovable until you give love a chance?
Not everyone is like the man from childhood... the fear is real.. all too real and never would we want to experience that pain again. But you are you.. not the man from childhood.
Take a good look and you will see that you are already loved... it is now up to you to see if you are ready to love someone in return.... the answer is inside when you are ready to love you will know.. find the strength to trust it.
This is not advice.. because I can't give you any. I am not in your shoes. I just hate to see a fellow woman feel that she can't be loved or is unlovable by actions of someone in the past that she had no control over.
I bet my last dollar that you are loved... Look around... friends.... family.... co-workers..??? There is at least one heart that loves you already. :)
I am sorry but i have to disagree you are very lovable... no doubt the abandonment as a child plants doubts in your mind but you are such a sweet individual with a big caring heart and gentle soul... just have faith in yourself cause i do that you will be loved for real.
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