Human Again

Human Again

A Poem by Mysty Rayn
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Somethings you just wish you could say...

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I can’t cry for you anymore.

The last tear has fallen.

 

You’ve stolen the last piece of my heart.

Consumed the last minute of my worry.

Enjoyed the last torment to my emotions.

Taken your last step on my feelings.

Ignored the last of my thoughts.

Instigated the last of my pain.

 

Today I am done.

I am complete without you.

Better in you absence.

Human again.

 

-Mysty Rayn

 

© 2009 Mysty Rayn


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Wow, this is just... perfect. Word for word. This is so blunt, raw and powerful that I can almost imagine being the target of your words and feeling them slap my face. The structure of the poem was beautiful as well.

Forever gonna be in my favourites.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I feel proud to congratulate you for writing this great piece after three years of posting.
The content of the piece pleases the heart while its shape pleases the eyes.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Wow Mysty that was certainly something , you gave it with both barrels blazing and showed independence and confidence...

Today I am done.
I am complete without you.
Better in you absence.
Human again.

love this ending... you are yourself and at your best without this person tearing you down. BRAVO

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 3 people found this review constructive.


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