The Way

The Way

A Poem by MIA ST. PAUL
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This is a Poem written by My eight years old daughter......yep she's a writer too

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The Way

A Poem by Mikayla

 

I have a dog..

I like to play..

I want a rooster..

That likes to jog..

I know this kid..

That has a fly..

He calls it wings..

He's a very wrong guy..

I know a kid...

That knows a story..

That is terribly..

H-I-S-T-O-R-Y

I see a star...

And Make a wish..

And.........................

Thats the way..

I Vanish!

 

 

 

© 2009 MIA ST. PAUL


Author's Note

MIA ST. PAUL
My Daughter has learned how to do poetry in school and she wants to let you know that....:)

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The mind of children are amazing. A excellent poem with imagination and thoughts. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


I just loved this piece! Hope she keeps writing!!!

Craig

Posted 14 Years Ago


She's awesome! Very talented little girl you have there.
I'm very impressed. Please tell her we all think so.

Posted 14 Years Ago


mia, this is cute, and humorous just the waya colorful poem would make the reader feel young again,
and quite well written in scope of creativeness, your daughter has talent, and shows at so of an early age,
keep em coming :) take care, Michael

Posted 14 Years Ago


Cute.....fun to read.

Hugs,
Anna

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

See thats how I write my poetry too.......smiles
so you know I loved it. Tell her Mia I think shes
a great artiest and thanks for sharing.

Kelley

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daughter like mother, oh my, what wonders shall we encounter in the future. :) Very good poem from one so young. Keep up the good work. Phantom..........

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That is truly adorable... I see your talents have been passed on to her :-)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LOL! How flipping cute. I love kids. ;)

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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