Nadine Livie Eaves

ideas are born of subtlety and wishing
the vacant gaze, the lost cause
mere details of a bigger scene
the prologue to this restarting game.  

featuring you, you, you
let's not forget you, too
a crowd of gatherings
the audience of a great play.  

life has come anew
dimming stars, ignis fatuus
enjoy the memories
you're only a click and flash away

Author's Note

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Reviews

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"life has come anew
dimming stars, ignis fatuus
enjoy the memories
you're only a click and flash away..."
...'ignis fatuus'--this works perfectly
in setting this poem's mood...
...magnificent poetry...i love it:-)

J:)

[Looouise]

I like it. And I'm not too sure how I feel about it or towards it; but it does make you think a little about the surroundings of life and sorts.
Now I'm thinking of the world as a stage :]

[Coyote Poetry]

A excellent poem. We can fall into the light and fall just as quickly away from it. Description was very good. Ending was perfect.
Coyote

[Coyote Poetry]

A excellent poem. I like the description in your poem. Ending was very good. Life is to be lived and celebrated.
Coyote

[Steve]

I really liked this, made me think how every beginning has an ending that can be as sudden as a snapping lens of a camera. Thankyou for sharing!