Bad boy

Bad boy

A Poem by NaCl

I always go for the bad boy

Who would never give me a chance

Hope that I could be special enough

Not to slip away like sand

I pine for the jerks

For the heartless and cold

Hoping I could be the warmpth

They yearn to hold

© 2011 NaCl


Author's Note

NaCl
Yeah, so it really needs no explaination.

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i liked it...it was a good way to express your self and you did just that...i get it completely..


Posted 9 Years Ago


Loved this!!! Short, simple, clear, and concise!

Please mark this constructive!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Needing love and acceptance are such essential things for us. We need to feel that we are special to somebody, and unfortunately we usually need it from the wrong people.
Nicely written, good work!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Strong emotion. Very good form. Btw if a boy can't see the amazing person you are as just you you do not need the dbag sweetie:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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NaCl
NaCl

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Hi! I'm a soon-to-be thirteen year old poet, my life ambition is to becoma a world famous author/lawer. My favorite poems are ones that make yoou think, but are not depressing. I have OCD and mild fib.. more..

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