Live how you want

Live how you want

A Poem by NaCl

Oh little girl

You seem so sad

Because you grew up

With a mean old dad

Oh girl

You are so depressed

Because you can't afford

A pointless dress

You slice your fragile skin

That is where it begins

You are not happy

With happiness




It seems like lately everyone has become obsessed with being depressed. It is the new thing. Well if you read this, I would love to get a trend going where we can show girls that it is okay to be happy. Guys to!

© 2011 NaCl

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Send me a RR if you follow the trend :)

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Awww! Well, it's hard nowadays. Sometimes people get depressed due to different reasons. You can't blame them.. especially since the economy is so down.. but people are still trying to work hard to keep life stable. Other times, people are sad due to family.. school.. work even.. It's difficult to say. But I do love your poem very much! It has a deep meaning and quite inspiring at the same time. People do need to live! People need happiness! We only have this life.. so why not right? =D Thanks for writing.

Simply amazing!

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