If only I heard

If only I heard

A Poem by NaCl

These words from your lips

When will they slip

When will you tell me

How much you need me

I can't shake this feeling

Of this wanting and needing

I can't let go of you

Your burned in my mind

If only I heard

That one single word

Could change the whole game

Life would never be the same

And we would have a love scene


Your so beautiful

When will I hear

Thos words I hold so dear

Will they ever be true

Will the ever come

From you


© 2011 NaCl

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Wow. This is great! I love the flow and rhyme scheme. You capture the attention of the reader. =) It's so full of passion. Love it!
Wonderful job!

Posted 9 Years Ago

very good.

Posted 9 Years Ago

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