Moonlit Fields

Moonlit Fields

A Poem by Vague
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My favorite. I really like how I put this one together.

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I saw these Autumnal stars; she said.
When - the sky breaks.
My soul- -it bends.

Outside, she dances
From starlit flowers
Her moon-kissed wings touch-
My pearl-strung hours

Her heart struck mind, those-
Regal wounds- -mean nothing.
Mean everything. Mean-
Ice-wrought tears - lay unmoved.

I can almost see - the Winter stars; she said.
When - Moon shifts - her - soul drifts- this-
While lies frozen - her frost woven dreams
Remain; seamlessly pouring - seeking-

Silent compassion - from unending days.
How lonely it felt; her - star-ridden gaze.

© 2010 Vague


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I can almost see - the Winter stars; she said.
When - Moon shifts - her - soul drifts- this-
While lies frozen - her frost woven dreams
Remain; seamlessly pouring - seeking-

Wow...this is an amazing poem so softly spoken. I get the feeling from this poem that she is in love, but he is not necessarily in love with her. Though, I would guess he likes that she is in love with him. It is a beautiful read which I had to read a few times to be fully immersed in its magic. Thanks for entering the Missing Him, Missing Her contest.

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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Simply beautiful...
omg. I really loved this. :) :)
This is an inspiration!

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Beautifully written and well formed...
Language is very lovely...

Ty for entering!

Lynda

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This is dreamy, flows like a whisper of a love song, something
shared and intimate.

Something rare and calm.

That's how it made me feel:).

I love this cosmic dance, makes me want to
drift along as well.

Your lines are compelling and mesmerizing.

Great work...AD

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

The atmosphere of this is elegant. It stimulates the senses with a touch of class and images of femininity that offer meaning to the sensation of touch as well". A well penned invitation to "see what a touch feels like. I enjoyed the composition.

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

The only word that can describe this poem is this one: beautiful.
The words you choose to tell this poem are amazing, they really make you feeling emotional.

Thank you for sharing this.

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I can almost see - the Winter stars; she said.
When - Moon shifts - her - soul drifts- this-
While lies frozen - her frost woven dreams
Remain; seamlessly pouring - seeking-

Wow...this is an amazing poem so softly spoken. I get the feeling from this poem that she is in love, but he is not necessarily in love with her. Though, I would guess he likes that she is in love with him. It is a beautiful read which I had to read a few times to be fully immersed in its magic. Thanks for entering the Missing Him, Missing Her contest.

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I really like this one... well structured with such deep mystery to make you think and feel... nicely done.

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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