My dearest father

I love my father more than anyone else.

MY DEAREST FATHER 

I have written several things for my mother,

I equally admire and love you more than her father.

I am not afraid to unveil my past,

Oh! Father your place in my heart is vast.

I had no mother since years,

She left me and I was in tears.

You were the one who took care of me father,

You turned all my tears to laughter.

Every night I woke you up,

But you never said anything to me.

Every day I created fuss,

But you bared all my tantrums with ease.

No one can take that place you have in my heart.

I have loved you since the very start.

I cannot imagine being away from you,

I have not loved anyone else more than you.

I lack words to say what all you have ever done for me,

You were my mother too,

You took care of me like she would do.

But she was not with me,

You have filled her love by loving me from her side too.

I always want to see you happy,

No one can ever do what you have done for me,

You are the best in the world,

You are best in whole history.

I am sorry for every pain I have caused you,

I am in tears father,

I cannot imagine losing you.

Reviews

[SleeplessVolcano]

touching tribute, this one. We will never quite understand the power of the love of a parent, even we experience it ourselves. Just as we are a part of their hearts walking around, our kids complete the circle, giving us the love we hopefully gave our parents.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much for your kind words. I agree with it. We can never repay what our parents have done for us.

[NightMoves]

This poem is very well written and it really touched me effectively. Although our situations aren't totally similar, I too felt I didn't have a mother to call upon as a child. This nearly made me cry. If it wasn't for my stubbornness, I might have. I love this poem!

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. I am glad to know that you liked it. ☺

[Radhika. kumar]

well written!lovely words. there is a strong sense of emotional sentiments which enriches the whole writing.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. Feeling truly happy to know that you liked it. ☺

[Abhishek Asthana]

its almost like a tribute to a father... each n every emotion s been highlihted very well... lovely way to describe it

[Najam Us Saher]

Feeling truly happy to know that you liked it. Thank you so much. :)

[Eisha]

This is a well written poem with a beautiful message!! :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. ☺

[Eisha]

You're welcome!!

[manisha]

nice poem father is really important part of any one life. keep writing

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes...Thank you so much ☺

[Gooneelkumar Bannenavar]

Lovely poem dude...loved reading it!

[Najam Us Saher]

I am a girl. Thank you 😕

[Gooneelkumar Bannenavar]

Ohh!...so sorry....mistook u....hope u understand...sorry...

[Gooneelkumar Bannenavar]

Ohh!...so sorry....mistook u....hope u understand...sorry...

[Najam Us Saher]

It's okay. Many get confused because of my name.

[David Adedokun]

I love those articulations and I am especially happy because I belong to the 'male clique'

[David Adedokun]

I love those articulations and I am especially happy because I belong to the 'male clique'

[Najam Us Saher]

I am glad that you could relate to it. Thank you so much.

[Khushi Madan]

loved the poem... truly, a father is as important as a mother... lovely poem!

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes....thank you so much ☺