Wise words

WISE WORDS

Rise up, you are stronger than you were yesterday,

Live, like today is your last day,

Be a tide that rises with a fall,

Give hope to yourself and to one and all.

Past gives us experiences to learn,

It is not a time period to dwell,

The one who falls and gets up

Is stronger than the one who never fell.

Mistakes are a tragedy,

Apology remains the remedy,

Guilt never changed the situations,

You revive with every realization.

There are stories which are not meant to be told,

But there are truths which needs to get unfold.

Time is the master for all those things,

Fate do change if in it you believe. 

Reviews

[R.J Calzonetti (Siniste..]

I love it. The rhymes are good, and the message is too. These are indeed wise words!

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes...Thank you so much ☺

[heartspeaks]

its motivating and energizing. Truly are the words of wisdom presented beautifully.. keep it up

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. I am glad to know that you liked it. :)

[CAPOLAVORO]

This one is puurfectoo! You could write inspirational ones. Glad to know that. :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes....I may be unable to inspire myself but I do want to inspire others. Thank you so much ☺

[Joey Nizz]

Great words of wisdom, people should always be strong and never give up and rise like a strong tidal wave.

Thanks for sharing, i enjoyed it.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. I am glad to know that you liked it ☺

[Joey Nizz]

you're very much welcome ^^

[Abhishek Asthana]

Beautifully explained all the facts... Very well written !!

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. I feel glad to know that you liked it ☺

[Sonakshi Arora]

This is such an inspirational poem! Thanks for sharing with us :D

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much ☺ I mean it.

[Sonakshi Arora]

My pleasure!

[Abraham George]

The one who falls and gets up
Is stronger than the one who never fell.

Falls means failure that we should treat as our teachers and we need to learn from that and rise up . One who never fell have no such teachers to teach him what not to do.

but for the-

Fate do change if you believe in.

you need to believe in yourself. Our past should be a good teacher who tell us what to do and not to do in our future. for that we should need to go through every situations and then only we can face big issues Like cool Captain MS Dhoni.

your 16 lines are simple but if you dig up deeper there is meaning which won't be complete inn 16 Pages. Simply said a complex thing in a poetic way with nice presentation and rhyme.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. ☺ Truly feeling very happy to know that you liked it.

[wordman]

so if you don`t fall ,then you can`t experience life,
pain and love runs hand in hand

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes, that's true. Thank you so much. ☺

[Surya]

Yep, fate changes, will power and courage two most important ingredients to make your heart a happy recipe...:)

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes...Thank you so much ☺

[OhSnapShley]

The one who falls and gets up
Is stronger than the one who never fell.

Really liked that line. Good job.

[Najam Us Saher]

That was the prompt given for the contest. Thank you so much ☺