That day

That day

A Poem by Najam Us Saher
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I was sitting with my mother and she said me these exact words.

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THAT DAY
"What is the use to yearn for a thing which we cannot attain?" she said,
I was downhearted and speechless,
You cannot have me back mother, but don't you miss me was my heart whispering.

© 2017 Najam Us Saher


Author's Note

Najam Us Saher
Please don't mention that it needs to be a bit longer because I tried to capture a moment of my life which is so close to my heart.

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This dosen't deserve a review....it is priceless...a review will just lessen its worth....i can just say...MASHALLAH! hope that you always remain like this...

Posted 3 Years Ago


heartspeaks

3 Years Ago

Every writers writing does...So tell me did i judge you wrong? You are a damn emotional person! aren.. read more
Najam Us Saher

3 Years Ago

Yes you are right dear. ☺ Emotionally strong too sometimes.
heartspeaks

3 Years Ago

same pinch.. :D
There are time we don't have to say much to capture the moment. This piece is one of does time.
Simply beautiful.Darling

Posted 3 Years Ago


Najam Us Saher

3 Years Ago

Yes you are right. This poem a true incident remains close to my heart. I am glad to know that you l.. read more
Nic lines...ur lines in this poem touch my heart...

Posted 3 Years Ago


Najam Us Saher

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much. I am feeling truly happy to know that you liked it ☺
Mamta Sonowal

3 Years Ago

ur welc'me...
Its so sad if your heart wants something but someone else tells you you cant have it, specially if that someone is dear to your heart.
Thank you for sharing.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Najam Us Saher

3 Years Ago

Yes you are right. I thank you so much for reading.
Joey Nizz

3 Years Ago

Your welcome.
You Moment of Lfe And Your Feelings Describes Everthing About your Love For Your Mother.......

Posted 3 Years Ago


Najam Us Saher

3 Years Ago

Yes....Thank you so much ☺
This looks like a four liner little story and captures true regrets.
Keep it up!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Najam Us Saher

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much ☺
emotional i must say....
i felt really touched reading this little thing..
instead of expressing your feeling and emotion in a long paragraph....you made an expression through this little piece and keep it up...wonderful

Posted 3 Years Ago


Najam Us Saher

3 Years Ago

Yeah....Thank you so much. ☺
It certainly does not need to be extended. It's good as it is. I would suggest putting in quotation marks around the dialogues to give it more clarity. About the subject, it was heart touching. Your mother's words are true too but something which is easier said than done..
Well penned.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Najam Us Saher

3 Years Ago

Yes...Thank you so much ☺ Feeling truly happy to know that you liked it.
Dr. YumnaKay

3 Years Ago

You're welcome. Always a pleasure reading good works :)
Always wonderful poem, very well penned saher loved it😁

Posted 3 Years Ago


Najam Us Saher

3 Years Ago

_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ ☺ I am facing a situation like you do I don't know what to say... read more
Just wow..... I don't have words! You always leave me speechless. Loved it.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Najam Us Saher

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much. Feeling truly happy to know that you liked it ☺

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Added on March 30, 2017
Last Updated on March 31, 2017
Tags: Life, mother, love, sadness, misery, pain

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Najam Us Saher
Najam Us Saher

India



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