Distraction

Inspired from a true event.

DISTRACTION

Got something to read,

But I got distracted by a bird,

Searching for a place to build its shelter,

It arrived inside my abode.

I couldn't help but looked at its movements,

I felt the joy in its singing.

I and the bird were alone,

I looked at it,

And it looked at me,

The place was quiet and cold,

Adoring the little black bird became a pleasant memory.

Early morning passed by,

And the construction started,

The noises were loud,

It silenced the bird's chirping,

And it departed. 

Reviews

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

thanks again for entry into my current competition, good luck, wonderful

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Thank you for entering this is lovely
Truly

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much.

[Coyote Poetry]

Some distraction are wonderful. It is worthwhile to enjoy nature and the song of the birds. Thank you Najam for sharing the amazing poetry. I enjoyed this one.
Coyote

[Najam Us Saher]

I am glad that you did, thank you very much.

[Coyote Poetry]

A wonderful poem and you are welcome.

[MaximumFlight]

Great job. It puts images of birds and city into my mind.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thanks a lot.... ☺

[Hasventhran Baskaran]

A beautiful poem about nature

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much for reading.

[Darren K. Jackson]

We have so much to learn from nature

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes you are right. Thank you so much.

[CAPOLAVORO]

So cute. It tells like a story. Although, as I read it I expect the bird to have a tragic ending more than this lol. Such a dark mind I have. This one is a great piece Najam. :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. You just made me very happy. ☺

[wordman]

a time with nature,a look in to the real world

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes. Thank you so much for reading Sir. ☺

[Wajiha Nayeem]

Such a cute one....
Najam, you always set marks♡

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much. ☺ Your words always make me happy.

[Wajiha Nayeem]

hehehe....my pleasure pretty one..

[Jay-LH]

aww this is great, well done!

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much :)

[Jay-LH]

You're welcome