Distraction

Inspired from a true event.

DISTRACTION

Got something to read,

But I got distracted by a bird,

Searching for a place to build its shelter,

It arrived inside my abode.

I couldn't help but looked at its movements,

I felt the joy in its singing.

I and the bird were alone,

I looked at it,

And it looked at me,

The place was quiet and cold,

Adoring the little black bird became a pleasant memory.

Early morning passed by,

And the construction started,

The noises were loud,

It silenced the bird's chirping,

And it departed. 

Reviews

[Anjali]

I bet the the bird is as beautiful as it's voice. By the way, you've explained the memory very beautifully​.

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes she was charming to behold. Thank you so much ☺

[Anjali]

You're welcome!

[Abhishek Asthana]

so sweet,, the way u narrated in form f short story is awesome... one can easily visualize and relate... really good work

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much for your kind words. I appreciate it. ☺

[Mr.Writer]

So rich, descriptive words you've used Najam...
I'm awed by this piece!
Definitely a distraction...
Amazing job!

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much. Feeling really happy to know that you liked it :)

[Stacy Purvis]

I could almost truly see the bird sitting there. Great writers are like painters...taking people on magical journeys.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much for reading. Glad to know that you liked it ☺

[Surya]

That's good imagery, morning sunrise with a bird...That's lovely...I liked it..:)

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much ☺ I am glad that you liked it.

[Joey Nizz]

Wohh this is one good story that meets the heart, the same kinda happened to me years ago.. I miss that bird but I know its in a better place now..

Thank you for sharing Najam.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. Feeling truly happy to know that you liked it ☺

[Joey Nizz]

You are most welcome!
Im glad that you are happy ^^
And I dont like is, I love it it was really good to read it!

[Farhan Shaikh]

Wowiee..wonderful.
Your distraction turned into a very good poem..well penned Saher. I like this a lot.

[Najam Us Saher]

That's really good to know. ☺

[Sikandar Khan]

So Nice Scenry Bird HAs Dsitracted You And Vanished Wht You Want To Write...SomeThing Also Happen With ME You Know When I Was Wriiting Something Emotional Roamantic Light Gone Off Everything Distracted.......

[Najam Us Saher]

Also what I wanted to convey was that human beings are responsible to some extent in the interferance with nature. Thank you so much I am happy thatnyou liked it ☺