Sometimes

SOMETIMES

Sometimes we let go the things we love,

We make mistakes, we fall, we lie above.

Sometimes we try hard to make life perfect,

We realise, we apologize; after we regret.

Sometimes we feel life will fall into place,

We try harder than we could, just to catch the pace.

Sometimes we are helpless and tired of trying,

We sit back and hope, life will be worth living before dying.

Sometimes we smile when we are dead inside,

We force it, which leads to a misguide.

Sometimes we are fed up and want all this to end,

We break the barriers and become weak to bear life's bend.

Sometimes we want things so badly,

We make an effort to achieve it exactly.

Sometimes we are left with unaccomplished dreams,

We lay emotionless in tears with silent screams.

Reviews

[Hasventhran Baskaran]

A beautiful check on reality.Nice one, Najam.

[Najam Us Saher]

I am really happy that you liked this one. Thank you so much for taking the time to read my poems. I appreciate it ☺

[SZHZIA]

It is very nice piece as a poem with a philosophical thought on life. But you made different theme from what you have mentioned in the line written just after the title of the poem. Though, you have mentioned the title of poem 'Sometime' many time but you have ignored the differences between 'like' and 'love'. In short it is thoughtful and emotional poem in which you have portrayed the reality of life. Thanks for sharing. :-)
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Szhzia

[Najam Us Saher]

I totally agree with you. I'll work on it. I am widely elated to see you back. Thank you so much ☺

[Mr.Writer]

Such a realistic, emotional and fantastic poem Najam..
Well done, keep it up :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. I am really happy to know that you liked this :)

[Mr.Writer]

No problem :))

[Abraham George]

:star::star::star::star::star::star::star:

i'm so happy to see you thinking of something else and i am glad to know you are happy.

i loved your way of describing and expressions in this poem.

[Najam Us Saher]

Maybe I am happy, maybe I am not... last line is how exactly I feel. Thank you so much and yes maybe I will be happy don't you worry :)

[MaximumFlight]

So true, we do all these things; it depicts humans as a whole and what we all do at one point or another in our lives. Great job, this was amazing! :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much... your words really mean a lot. ☺

[Saumya]

This is a very real, and relatable piece from you, Najam.Sometimes, it is exactly those sometimes we realize how precious some people indeed were, but then all one has is regret, because they were left unhappy and unwanted.

Life offers what we exactly need, but sadly not everyone has that ability to see those perfectly precious people disguised as the most imperfect ones, ever! Yet the best 😊

I loved the simplicity and flow of this piece😊
Well done!


-Saumya

[Najam Us Saher]

You really made me happy. Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts. I am really grateful to you. ☺

[Saumya]

You're welcome, Najam😊

[AcasualPawn]

Every sentence depicting, different problems or happening... Many of them i also had faced...
Joined together as whole these sentences can describe 60% of a human.....
Keep writing najam

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much....I am glad that you understand... :)

[Misty]

I love the way you have presented a view. The description itself was a nice example for the entire piece. Simply gorgeous... and full of life!
keep it up!!!

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much. Life is full of emotions I say. ☺

[Misty]

yea...very true...