Misty Morning

Misty Morning

A Poem by Najam Us Saher

MISTY MORNING
Now that the lilac buds are in full bloom
And the dried earth is fertile
The lush greenery is regained 
With birds soaring up high 
The dew diffuses this day 
Even the air feels the joy
Melody rings everywhere
When the birds chirp peeping from the leaves
Peace, in my heart resides
To feel the aroma of the earth and sky
The stems smell heavenly 
Fragrance of flower they bear
The raindrops are elixir 
A blessing in disguise
They touch my skin 
And my soul is rejoiced. 

© 2018 Najam Us Saher


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What a tender and moving snippet of Spring. You really revealed how nature stirs the soul.

Posted 10 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

10 Months Ago

I thank you so much for your kind words.
i feel like it's a quote from a classic !
Wooaw ... I can imagine and dive in the atmosphere you're describing here *-* It's so alive and lovely

Posted 10 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

10 Months Ago

Thank you so much for reading this, today the weather is just the same and I am jumping in joy that .. read more
Black Jess

10 Months Ago

Oh great ^^ I'm glad I did !
PS : actually, my comment was not just this, I also said " You .. read more
Najam Us Saher

10 Months Ago

Oh that's great.
Thank you so much :)
Wow! my friend... you took spring back to me... I was drinking my regular tea when I was reading it and this piece was like sugar and it adds sweetness to my tea. Thanks for sharing this piece of writing. It is a very beautifully expressed piece and it seeks my attention because it makes you feel something. Keep it up

Posted 12 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

12 Months Ago

You made my day. Thank you very much for such a nice review. It means a lot. Have a nice day ahead.
Spring morning more and so beautifully poetic how you capture nature with your words and personal poetic observation wow. Your wording is superb as well wow and imagery superb. Kudos.

Soo nice to read from your inking again, pleez do comment/add your thoughts/ review my newest poem too. I like saying hi to poets and poetry.


Posted 1 Year Ago


Najam Us Saher

1 Year Ago

So kind of you. Thank you very much for such sweet words to appreciate my poems. It means a lot. read more
This is a free verse poem and is enjoyable nevertheless, with the use of very specific language such as 'the aroma of the earth and sky'. The whole poem encapsulates the happy mood of a misty morning in just a few condensed lines. A very skilful use of imagery here which brings the scene to life.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Najam Us Saher

1 Year Ago

Thank you very much for such a kind review. It means a lot, I truly appreciate your words.
what a peaceful mood. thank you for sharing

Posted 1 Year Ago


Najam Us Saher

1 Year Ago

I thank you very much for reading.
Very good imagery, loved it as usual..

Posted 1 Year Ago


Najam Us Saher

1 Year Ago

I am happy to see your review after a long time...
It was a tiring day but I feel a lot fresher now! Apt words used. Love the picture they create.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Najam Us Saher

1 Year Ago

Thank you very much for your kind words. I appreciate it :)
Zoya

1 Year Ago

No worries :)
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Ne
A couple of days ago my father had surgery and the whole day the world outside resembled this feeling, and in all honest it helped my nerves calm. Absolutely loved the work, keep it up!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Najam Us Saher

1 Year Ago

Thank you very much.
How is your father now?
Ne

1 Year Ago

Much better than before
I truly love this poem!
So full of imagery and i really felt peace and harmony as I read your poem!
Beautifuly written!
Good job!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Najam Us Saher

1 Year Ago

I thank you very much for reading.
I am really happy that it made you feel relaxing.

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Najam Us Saher
Najam Us Saher

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