Him

Him

A Poem by Nancy

The way he
Gazes at me
With his blue eyes
Lets me know 
I’m his one and only
The way his
Arms feel
Wrapped tightly 
Around my waist
Leave no doubt
He’s the missing piece.
The words he 
Whispers help me see
I’ve finally ended 
My journey
As he kisses 
My lips, All hesitation 
Takes flight
Making certain I know
Exactly where I’m supposed to be..
Is by his side.

© 2010 Nancy


Author's Note

Nancy
I'm not sure if I'm finished with this.. any ideas?

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I enjoyed this poem. Love strikes a cord in many dimensions: to see, to feel, to hear and to taste. Maybe add something of his scent when he embraces you to fill out all of our precious senses. Good job :)))

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I'm pretty sure it's finished, the poem and the hesitation

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very adoring so far Nancy, I with put another stanza in describing
what he feels about you, to kind of balance off your adulation toward
him. Overall still a wonderful write...

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like the ending. Your words described a good place to be. The ending allow you to be there. A beautiful poem. When we know the love is good. Can't be no happier. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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