Simple Words Of You And Me

Sharing candy, sharing hearts.
One is left broken apart.
No one survives whole once again.
No one survives without any pain...

How much you mean to me?
Simple words cannot describe, do you agree?
Everything we would have been.
Now all the memories just bring chagrin.

Never thought it would end.
Just so quickly as it began.
I never wanted to fall.
Especially if you wouldn't of catched me after all.

Now holding my feelings deep within.
Until it all sinks in.

Author's Note

Chagrin means- to feel ashamed.

Reviews

[Rose Tyler]

This is heartbreaking, and I know how this emotion you portray in your poem feels, time and time again.

[Ali_Avery~7]

Aww. Tragic. I love the emotion. If you just clean up the grammar a little it would be better. For instance it should read "wouldn't have caught" instead of "wouldn't of catched."

[TBird J.]

How terribly sad. You have very strong writing skills. Great use of vocab.