Let Me

Let Me

A Poem by Nankoto
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Let me be the one
Who picks you up when you are down
Who holds you close when you want to cry
Let me be your savior

I’ll hold your hand on the darkest day
When the world ends
I’ll be by your side
Let me be your savior

I’ll travel to the ends of this Earth
Just to make you happy
To cure your sadness
Let me be your savior

I’ll carry you over this rough ground
Protect you from the hurt
And be your shield in the fight
Let me be your savior

I’ll fly you across the ocean
And lay on the sands by you side
To listen to you in your hard times
Let me be your savior

© 2009 Nankoto


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A touching piece, wonderfully written. To want to be there for someone or to have someone who wants to be there for you is a wonderful thing. A great write with wonderful flow.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aw wow!! Really beautiful piece!! Incredible loving devotion that u presented here. I had a huge smile all thru the poem hehe. Very awesome piece!! :)

B.A.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice write :]

I liked it and I liked how after each stanza you used the line
"Let me be your savior"
You got down right to the point

Great job

,BrittneyMarie

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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