A Poem by Nankoto

Last night. Ya, not so good.


And here I lose myself
Lose my heart and my mind
I can't take this pain I feel inside
Every glance at you
Places another knife in my heart
These tears I cry when no one seems to care
Just crash into the dark void you left around me
And this silence
It wears me down with its deafening noise
The pain is never ending
As it haunts my every waking moment
And my every dream
The future that I once held bright
Now stands torn and tattered in the distance
I can't stand the sights I see before me now
The king of a lonely world
Not even a faithful Knight to stand by my side
For when you gave up one me
All the light inside died out

© 2009 Nankoto

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The pain is real, and it literally seems to want to jump out of the pages. Sweltering and that last line's just very touching.

Posted 9 Years Ago

The Captain said it best here. The feeling must be unbearably awful :( And this was a really great piece that really showed the pouring out of emotions in every way. Excellent job! Hang in there, man.


Posted 10 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I'm sorry to hear about this. Its the silences, the things that are never said that leave there marks upon a wounded heart and soul. Breaking up in not easy or plesant, and they pain inside hurts so bad. Only time till heal the cuts, but the scars remain.

Posted 10 Years Ago

2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

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