Time

Time

A Poem by +Naomi+
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Time. Enjoy...

"

Time.

It passes quicker,

than the wind that comes and goes.

It leaves my wounds open,

leaves me here on the floor,

bleeding.

 

Time comes and taxes my heart,

memories overflowing again.

They take over and blackmail me.

Time is a f*****g pain in the a*s...

© 2010 +Naomi+


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+Naomi+
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I love this (: I relate to this alot. Great job (as usual) :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


short but very good! very true!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Sometime time can be a pain in the a*s. Time can be a helper to. After a period of time all things become less important and forgotten. I like your description and strong ending. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yes, time is a 'f*****g pain in the a*s'. I can relate. Good poem :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


heheh yeah it sure is enjoyable :D made me sad though...dunno why...

Posted 13 Years Ago


Love the blunt words and getting straight to the point. Brilliant poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago


"Time is a f*****g pain in the a*s..."

Love the bluntness of that last line. It's just so honest and true.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I love the imagery and flow to this.. Really well written; love it!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I love this! I can really relate to this. I have felt like time is flying by too : great job. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Love the last line, it is very true. Nice poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on December 19, 2010
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+Naomi+

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