Amanda.

Amanda.

A Poem by +Naomi+
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No one could ever replace her.
She's one of the only people I trust 
and no one could ever take her away now.
Amanda's amazing, pretty and smart.
She's found a guy who loves her for her.
Someday, maybe I'll get the same.
Amanda's one of my role models.
One day, I want to look back and say:
"Yeah. I was friends with Amanda Marlow. Beat that."
One day, I want to rub it in everyone's faces.
You're gonna leave everyone behind in the dust.
You fill the silence of the earth with laughter,
you have Raven chasing right after.
I love how you love each other
and I hope one day,
I can find that in a guy.
Amanda, you're my best friend.
You've helped me through all the times I've felt alone.
I hope I do the same for you.
You deserve the world and more.
(For my best friend Amanda)

© 2011 +Naomi+


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Sweet and heartfelt lol, but also with a tincture of prurience on your part, maybe? You might want to scramble her last name though XD just in case.

Posted 12 Years Ago


this is a beautiful poem for a best friend.. and amanda has a great best friend!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Without are friends and family we are nothing, good read sounds like shes a great friend

Posted 12 Years Ago


I feel the same way about my best friend.... only I'm not looking for a guy like her's, I'm looking for a girl like her........

you did a really good job with this.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Damn

Posted 12 Years Ago


Funny, out of all the read requests, I picked the two that create a form of exchange, this morning. Wonderfully written!

Posted 12 Years Ago


A beautiful piece for your best friend.

Posted 12 Years Ago


A beautiful and positive poem. We need good friends to keep us balance and happy. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


A piece which can be written in two ways. Firstly, the love you hold for your best friend and the importance she has in your life, and secondly, the search for the perfect guy and love, which you find in Amanda's love.
A warm write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


She must be one special lady.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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+Naomi+

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Hey. I'm Naomi Williams. I'm 13 years old and have been writing since...well ever since I can remember. I tend to write some really weird poetry that usually comes out of what I'm feeling at that mome.. more..

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