Heaven, Hell and all in between.

The epic battle of good and evil, that lead to.........

In the arms of the angels as they carry me,

I surrender to heaven and its sparkling sea.

I'm in the arms of the angels and the passion is strong,

As I enter the moonlight, under Gabriel's song.

Below the fire is raging in the apocalyptic cities,

the blood flow a burden with unrelenting quantities.

The shakes of the earthquakes from the grumbling demons,

chaos in motion through the satanic legions. 

A death in slow motion at the center of the war,

the loss of an innocent child so tender and raw.

As the blood of the youth sinks into the soil,

the clouds part ways and the gods embroil.

Lightening strikes and waves crash upon souls,

angels clean up the forest of demons and trolls.

The battle begins to balance both sides begin to fall,

one angel and devil at the center of it all.

The duo collide drifting into space,

the planets and stars scar the enemies face.

The angel grabs a planet at the top, and the devil below,

they fuse into place creating earth as we know.

The gods from the galaxy set the rules which fell,

Angels had their heaven, and the Devils had their hell.

The gap in between was a second chance at a start,

animals and plants grew, to the sound of a beating heart.

Reviews

[VannahBanana]

I loved this. It was very....I don't want to say elegant. but along those lines. It made me want to read more, about each and every bit of it. It's not a poem, it's a story with chess board, but all the pieces. This is inspiring and nice.
I usually have something else to say, whether it be critiquing or something else. But I don't think I can do anything to critique this.
Good job Nathan.