Short Poem: Innovation

Just a small though poem about the spontaneity of good/bad ideas. The conception of something from nothing. Abstract to physical.

Innovation

Simple thoughts

placed in a matchbox,

one by one

ready to ignite

on their own.

 

Catching light,

spontaneously

in abstraction;

the intricate webs

of vision

made tangible. 

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"Simple thoughts

placed in a matchbox,

one by one

ready to ignite

on their own. "

A splendid poem...:)................

[plainme]

The idea of ideas in a matchbox is great, very very visual and clever, did you light that idea or did it spontaneously combust? Great write, naznaz! I really enjoy reading your stuff!

[naznaz]

Ah, Thank you! I must admit it was pretty spontaneous.

[zainul]

Wonderful matchbox concept.
Thoughts are compared with matchstick.
Great idea.
Tangible thoughts presented in magical words.
Well done.

[The Lost Poetry Files]

Wonderful read, much enjoyed

well done :)

[Trevor Jay Bloodworth]

I'm digging this also. I like the theme and the wording. "Placed in a matchbox" was a good line, too.