Front door !

Front door !

A Poem by NebraskaHope
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Poem speaks for itself!

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Front Door
Something about raindrops that collide with the pavement,
that drip that hits concrete leaving it blurry,

you knock upon my door asking me to let you in,
without checking the pep hole I did because I noticed you friend,
pass A handshake you became my soul mate,
you said I wont hurt, I wont bring tears but you did,
you're like the boy carved from wood cause you cried wolf to me over and repeatedly again
you ask to come back, that it wont ever happen again
but im standing strong like a statue, the door awaits
you might actually mean every word but that makes two of us
no need to fuss and wake the neighbors up,
looking at me passionately in my face saying I love you
emotions showing life and your eyes crying believe me
this sob story you selling comes with front row seats and everything

Its just Something about raindrops that collide with the pavement,
that drip that hits concrete leaving it blurry,

Its just Something about raindrops that collide with the pavement,
that drip that hits concrete leaving it blurry,

its just something about my tears that collide with the pavement,
that drip that hits the concrete leaving you blurry,

© 2013 NebraskaHope


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Oh I like it very much. Are you a musician Nebraska because there is something very lyrical about your writig. As though you already have a melody in mind and it's playing in your head. Your images are lucid and surprisingly tender considering τђє subject matter. You are saying 'never again' but your heart is saying something else. Great write, thanks.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Oh I like it very much. Are you a musician Nebraska because there is something very lyrical about your writig. As though you already have a melody in mind and it's playing in your head. Your images are lucid and surprisingly tender considering τђє subject matter. You are saying 'never again' but your heart is saying something else. Great write, thanks.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lyrically poetic and deeply moving. I enjoyed the thoughts in the piece. It really does explain itself.

Posted 7 Years Ago


NebraskaHope

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much !

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