Masturbation

Masturbation

A Poem by Octavious
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First time for all genre's right?

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Masturbation, 
The self pleasure, 
the one opportunity for your hidden spotlight of pleasure.
The chance for you to get exactly  what you want,
Where you want it. 

Slowly your hand becomes your slave,
the faint whimpering escaping between the firm lips -
that you try to clam shut,
fearing the awakening of any foul players of your dirty deeds,
as the arousement becomes stronger, and stronger.

Moving fast, and fast 
making it closer to your ending goal,
your lip dripping blood down your chin
as you teeth sink into your lips to seal away the anticipated scream of satisfaction.

Your slave removing from its post
nothing but slop, and after math,
what have you done?

Masturbation, 
yes a  moment of adventure, pleasure and fantasy.

Masturbation,
a symbol for loneliness, and disparity. 

Masturbation 
the replacement of the one that can be loving you.

 

© 2015 Octavious


Author's Note

Octavious
If there is a way to improve it, please tell me - I'm a little bit out of my comfort zone here.

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This was really good actually, very vivid yet not over done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Very nicely written. Yes that's what it is, the act of doing something with no one judging what you do how you do it or what your thinking or saying.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Well written. I like the way you stated how the hand plays the slave and also the realization of how self pleasure is heavily linked to loneliness.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It is pretty interesting was a little uncomfortable reading but I always read my friends writing it is beautiful in its own way

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Octavious

9 Years Ago

Thanks, it was very uncomfortable writing it, I don't plan on writing another. LOL

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Tags: Masturbation, desperate, symbolism, sex, love

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