Illuminating My Heart..........

A candle consumes itself to spread Light...........

                                                                                      

The beautiful candle flame

Flickered, Flashed and Danced

Illuminating my room and my Heart……..

Author's Note

Candles never cease to fascinate me.............

Reviews

[Jessica Lima]

You painted this warm picture in just a few words :)

[Chase Dylan]

My eyes lit up with beautiful flickering flashes of illumination while reading... A succinct nice lil' ride of dancing flames... Well penned...

[Zephyr]

Thank you so much, Silente...
Am happy you enjoyed...😂

[Chase Dylan]

So very welcome...

[Hebe]

Candles bring warmth and so did your words💝

[Zephyr]

Thank you so much, Hebe...
Your warm review made me happy 😂

[Poetic License]

Wonderful imagery. Fire happens to be my element, and I also find myself entranced. Nicely done!

[Zephyr]

Thank you so much...
Glad to know you enjoyed...😄

[Surya]

That's sweet and true to believe...I enjoyed it Naat..:)

[Zephyr]

Thank you so much, Surya......

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Warm and lovely poem. I can see and feel the flame dance. I too find candles mesmerizing. Perfect.

[Zephyr]

Thank you so much..
Yeah, candles mesmerize.....😀

[CAPOLAVORO]

Beautiful Naat. I like hoe you used the candle in a way that shows your deep emotion and thoughts. Short but magical. :)

[Zephyr]

Glad to know you found my poem magical....
Thanks for the review...😄

[Joey Nizz]

This is was such a good read to start the day!
I love it when I see the flames dance so freely, candles are beautiful.

Thank you for sharing.

[Zephyr]

Thank you so much, Joey......
Always My pleasure........

[Joey Nizz]

Your welcome :)

[wordman]

i can see it flickering from here,who don`t love candles and fire places

[Zephyr]

Oh.......
Am really happy to hear that....
Glad you enjoyed:)

[Mel Jayne]

I like the way you used a metaphor to compliment the imagery that you created. I also like your use of alliteration for the three f words in a row. I do think that the use of ellipsis was confusing as I don't think that it was a very suspenseful ending and I don't know why you used a non standard number of full stops. I really liked it though, I would love to read some longer work, I think that you could use a manipulation of structure to your advantage in your poetry.

[Zephyr]

Thanks for the deep and honest review, Mel......
Fortunate to have a friend and critic like you.:)

[Great Aunt Astri]

Wot u on about Mel? Wot ellipses? And don't you know that a line of full stops at the end of a poem indicates that it goes on to infinity? That is very powerful!