Beyond Me...

“I am gonna kill you!”

He snarled.

But I didn’t care.

It’s what Lovers say.

When they get pissed off.

 

“Uh- huh? Kill me then!”

I retorted back.

I expected it to be a rhetorical challenge.

He won’t have the guts to do it.

He loves me!

 

The next moment a gory knife ripped apart my Heart.

I saw his bloody eyes staring into my lifeless ones.

 

A rhetoric gone too far.

Beyond my reach.

Beyond me.

 

Author's Note

Just a random story.
Also rhetoric isn't always good!

Reviews

[pia]

Omy this was dark xD yet interesting.
I liked ittt !!

[Surya]

A fight but a tragic end....some say love is cruel when there i nothing a part of our body works, may be that is what he is suffering with...overall I enjoyed it..:)

[Joey Nizz]

Loving the twist in this one!
Sometimes love makes us do crazy things, or sometimes love is so crazy it makes us too blind for who we love and not see their true motives.

Well wrote Neetha :)

[Zephyr]

You are so right Joey;)
Thank you so much!

[Joey Nizz]

Your very much welcome ^^

[duff]

Taking a walk on the dark side Neetha?! I love it! The twist and delivery are great. I did not expect to read this but am pleasantly surprised:)

[Zephyr]

I am so glad to read your words Duff:)

[duff]

It was my pleasure

[Wajiha Nayeem]

woah....that sudden part where he kills her is....my eyes were wide when i read that part and it left me speechless.....good one.

[Zephyr]

I am glad to hear that Wajiha:)

[Wajiha Nayeem]

pleasure dear one.

[Sofia]

Never imagined he would kill her. It's impressive as always. I'm really loving all ur short stories sis :) also the font size was apt. I loved it dear sissy :) keep writing 😊

[Zephyr]

You are so welcome sis:)

[Sofia]

:) :) :) :) :)

[Avinash]

In the spur of moment we can not always estimate others reaction. So better play safe and not challenge the animal inside.
:)

[Zephyr]

Thats my point.
Thank you so much Avinash:)

[Olabisi Rotimi Abel]

Unbelievable... He really did killed her..... This is really a little tragic story... Lovely pies my friend...

[Zephyr]

I am glad to read from you prince abel:)

[Olabisi Rotimi Abel]

Wow!!!!!... Thanks.... Calling me a prince really made me smile...

[Zephyr]

All the more happy for you:)

[wordman]

the lovers spat that went to far,creative

[Zephyr]

Thank you so much Wordman:)

[Priyanshi]

Few words, and I can feel the emotions you put into this story and I enjoyed it....great one....I always love your work, dear...
keep on writing.

[Zephyr]

I am happy dear:)