Beyond Me...

Beyond Me...

A Story by Neetha
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Gone too far!

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I am gonna kill you!”

He snarled.

But I didn’t care.

It’s what Lovers say.

When they get pissed off.

 

“Uh- huh? Kill me then!”

I retorted back.

I expected it to be a rhetorical challenge.

He won’t have the guts to do it.

He loves me!

 

The next moment a gory knife ripped apart my Heart.

I saw his bloody eyes staring into my lifeless ones.

 

A rhetoric gone too far.

Beyond my reach.

Beyond me.

 

© 2017 Neetha


Author's Note

Neetha
Just a random story.
Also rhetoric isn't always good!

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Omy this was dark xD yet interesting.
I liked ittt !!

Posted 2 Years Ago


A fight but a tragic end....some say love is cruel when there i nothing a part of our body works, may be that is what he is suffering with...overall I enjoyed it..:)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Loving the twist in this one!
Sometimes love makes us do crazy things, or sometimes love is so crazy it makes us too blind for who we love and not see their true motives.

Well wrote Neetha :)


Posted 2 Years Ago


Neetha

2 Years Ago

You are so right Joey;)
Thank you so much!
Joey Nizz

2 Years Ago

Your very much welcome ^^
Taking a walk on the dark side Neetha?! I love it! The twist and delivery are great. I did not expect to read this but am pleasantly surprised:)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Neetha

2 Years Ago

I am so glad to read your words Duff:)
duff

2 Years Ago

It was my pleasure
woah....that sudden part where he kills her is....my eyes were wide when i read that part and it left me speechless.....good one.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Neetha

2 Years Ago

I am glad to hear that Wajiha:)
Wajiha Nayeem

2 Years Ago

pleasure dear one.
Never imagined he would kill her. It's impressive as always. I'm really loving all ur short stories sis :) also the font size was apt. I loved it dear sissy :) keep writing 😊

Posted 2 Years Ago


Neetha

2 Years Ago

You are so welcome sis:)
Sofia

2 Years Ago

:) :) :) :) :)
In the spur of moment we can not always estimate others reaction. So better play safe and not challenge the animal inside.
:)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Neetha

2 Years Ago

Thats my point.
Thank you so much Avinash:)
Unbelievable... He really did killed her..... This is really a little tragic story... Lovely pies my friend...


Posted 2 Years Ago


Neetha

2 Years Ago

I am glad to read from you prince abel:)
rotimi abel

2 Years Ago

Wow!!!!!... Thanks.... Calling me a prince really made me smile...
Neetha

2 Years Ago

All the more happy for you:)
the lovers spat that went to far,creative

Posted 2 Years Ago


Neetha

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much Wordman:)
Few words, and I can feel the emotions you put into this story and I enjoyed it....great one....I always love your work, dear...
keep on writing.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Neetha

2 Years Ago

I am happy dear:)

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Added on June 15, 2017
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Tags: Rhetoric, Love, Hurt

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Neetha
Neetha

Kerala, India



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