Beyond Me...

Beyond Me...

A Story by Neetha
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Gone too far!

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I am gonna kill you!”

He snarled.

But I didn’t care.

It’s what Lovers say.

When they get pissed off.

 

“Uh- huh? Kill me then!”

I retorted back.

I expected it to be a rhetorical challenge.

He won’t have the guts to do it.

He loves me!

 

The next moment a gory knife ripped apart my Heart.

I saw his bloody eyes staring into my lifeless ones.

 

A rhetoric gone too far.

Beyond my reach.

Beyond me.

 

© 2017 Neetha


Author's Note

Neetha
Just a random story.
Also rhetoric isn't always good!

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I feel the emotions and anger through the poem!
Well done Neetha!
Keep it up

Posted 2 Years Ago


Mr.Writer

2 Years Ago

No problem :O
Mr.Writer

2 Years Ago

lol, I meant to have a smiley face :)
Neetha

2 Years Ago

Haha.... that happens:)
Oh so cruel....you have nicely narrated a short story in few lines..

Posted 2 Years Ago


Neetha

2 Years Ago

Thank you Najam:)
Najam Us Saher

2 Years Ago

You're welcome.
I didn't think he would do it either.
Should be a health warning on rhetorical poems.
Liked it though.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Neetha

2 Years Ago

Yes...
Thank you so much Paul:)

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Added on June 15, 2017
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Tags: Rhetoric, Love, Hurt

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Neetha
Neetha

Kerala, India



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