I can...
A Poem by
Zephyr
Say I can...
They say I am a curse
I say I am a boon.
They say I am weird
I say I am unique.
They say I can't
I say I can.
© 2017 Zephyr
Author's Note
Love yourself.
Believe in yourself.
Value yourself.
You can.
Always.
Reviews
Amazing use of words leading to outstanding ending. You can Neetha. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
Posted 5 Years Ago
5 Years Ago
I am glad to read from you Coyote:)
Thanks a lot
5 Years Ago
Was my pleasure and you are welcome. I liked this poem.
When everyone in the world says you can't and you're the only one who believes in yourself.
Nicely written
Posted 6 Years Ago
When everyone in the world says you can't and you're the only one who believes in yourself.
Nicely written
Believe in yourself as only you can...you are the only one who can affect change...short but sweet...good job
Posted 6 Years Ago
Believe in yourself as only you can...you are the only one who can affect change...short but sweet...good job
Yes self love is something which is not taught to us in school. It is something that most of us start learning after we end up in stormy & difficult phases of our lives.
Regarding your poem, you have significant talent expressing your feelings in short.
Posted 6 Years Ago
Yes self love is something which is not taught to us in school. It is something that most of us start learning after we end up in stormy & difficult phases of our lives.
Regarding your poem, you have significant talent expressing your feelings in short.
I like how you portray the hope and value we all should get in the world!
How unique we all are!
Well done Neetha, keep it up
Posted 6 Years Ago
I like how you portray the hope and value we all should get in the world!
How unique we all are!
Well done Neetha, keep it up
6 Years Ago
We are all unique and wonderful.
Sometimes we just don't feel so. That's sad.
Thanks f.. read more We are all unique and wonderful.
Sometimes we just don't feel so. That's sad.
Thanks for the review Shaan:)
6 Years Ago
I agree, it's really sad
No problem Neetha! :)
I really like this, short and simple but does portray a lot.
Posted 6 Years Ago
I really like this, short and simple but does portray a lot.
Beautiful anthem of strength, positivity, pride and inner courage. Great style, flow and force of each line. Be exactly who you are! Brava and blessings.
Posted 6 Years Ago
Beautiful anthem of strength, positivity, pride and inner courage. Great style, flow and force of each line. Be exactly who you are! Brava and blessings.
Keep the positivity up. Uniqueness is god.
Posted 6 Years Ago
Keep the positivity up. Uniqueness is god.
6 Years Ago
Thank you so much Paul:)
yeah that's it. don't let others pull you down
Posted 6 Years Ago
yeah that's it. don't let others pull you down
Full of positivity.
Do what others say you can't.
Mark.
Posted 6 Years Ago
Full of positivity.
Do what others say you can't.
Mark.
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