Goodbye...

Goodbye...

A Poem by Neetha
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Solitude

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Love betrayed her

Leaving her to lurch

In a lonely world.

 

Alas she met him

Who promised her

To end her solitude forever.




© 2017 Neetha


Author's Note

Neetha
Here 'him' refers to death.
A poem for many lost loved ones...

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You exactly penned down my emotions. I want to add few more lines to make it exactly my situation.
Alas she met him
Who promised her
To end her solitude forever
Situation was such
She got no choice than to sacrifice their love
She was left alone again
I am glad I came across this :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Najam Us Saher

4 Years Ago

I am glad I came across your words . I have met the one who deserves me and got engaged :)
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Neetha

4 Years Ago

I am happy for you Najam:)
Najam Us Saher

4 Years Ago

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This time, I hope it ends well...

Posted 4 Years Ago


This poem really has me shaking. It's very powerful. Keep up the writing!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Death is but the next step in the journey we all must take. Well done Neetha.

Posted 4 Years Ago


A sad poem shared. Death is never a goo date. You said a complete poem in so few words. Hard to do. Thank you Neetha for sharing your amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 4 Years Ago


Hi Neetha, very touching words and thoughts. We invest so much of ourselves in relationships.... maybe thats not so good, on the other hand what would life be without passion and risk! Lovely verse

Posted 4 Years Ago


Wow simply outstanding. I liked this poem, by my perception I thought she met someone (man) but alas after reading your note that ended pretty sad. Anyways great work 👏👏👏

Posted 4 Years Ago


Neetha

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much Anjali:)
Anjali

4 Years Ago

Most welcome 🙏😊
Love and life both can be difficult beyond imagination. Life goes through a series of ups and downs, challenges and rewards. On the other hand, love goes through different episodes too. Romance, togetherness, distance, separation, faithfulness, betrayal, heartbreak, and what not! It is, in itself, a challenge as well as a reward. But, I have always felt that a life without love is not life at all. Losing love is an end on its own. Specially for a soul that has tasted love even for once, for that existence carrying the loss of lost love is overburdening.

Nice words, good read. :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


Neetha

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much Fahmida:)
The world is all too lonely..

Posted 4 Years Ago


Neetha

4 Years Ago

Thanks for the review Alex:)
After a long time, i got to read another writing of you.Loved the use of words, Neetha and a touching piece even.
keep on writing.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Neetha

4 Years Ago

I am glad to read from you Priyanshi:)
Priyanshi

4 Years Ago

My pleasure.
A nice meaning behind it. Maybe you should change the word 'solitude' to 'loneliness' in the last line. Solitude has more or less a positive connotation I guess. Loneliness sounds more apt. Up to you though.
Like the personification of death here. Nicely done!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neetha

4 Years Ago

Thanks Zoe:)
And thanks for the suggestion:)
Zoya

4 Years Ago

No problem

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