Holding Back Humanity...

Holding Back Humanity...

A Story by Wordwhirl
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At Peril...

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History
Patriarchy
Prejudice
Society
Religions
Human Minds
ARE holding back Humanity...

© 2019 Wordwhirl


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Wordwhirl
After a break...
Do let me know what you think:)

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I agree with what you say here. I'm pretty sure most people will agree, even those who engage in these very things that suppress humanity. Most who suppress humanity never think of themselves as doing so. And that's why I'm not in favor of making such a statement using a string of complex cerebral concept words. You appeal to my brain with these, but I'm not feeling what you're saying much at all. I think this concept could also be painted in a more sensory way, instead of being so stilted & cerebral (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 5 Months Ago


So true.

Nicely penned piece.

One Caste,
One Religion,
One God
For mankind.

And the irony, the differences we humans have is mostly due to slight differences in our beliefs that's owing to lack of understanding fully.

Posted 7 Months Ago


That is 200% true! Nicely written

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Profoundly true words, Neetha. All those words hit the mark for me. Particularly in reference to religions; where faith is twisted into becoming an evil all of its own.

A piece of wisdom that soars beyond its brevity. Nicely conceived.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Wordwhirl

2 Years Ago

thank you:)
Truth...Painfully true. Well done.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Wordwhirl

2 Years Ago

Thank u😀....
so true neetha!! very beautifully penned. another great pieceee

Posted 2 Years Ago


Wordwhirl

2 Years Ago

Glad to hear from you writer😇
After a long time, its refreshinng to hear from you.
I agree dear Neetha.
"One people and one earth.
We need to get along for the sake of the children.
Bombs, guns and soldiers don't care what color or religion, you are"
Powerful words shared.
Coyote


Posted 2 Years Ago


Wordwhirl

2 Years Ago

I am truly happy to hear from you coyote. Thanks for remembering me😇
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

I haven't forgot you and you are welcome my friend.

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Added on April 20, 2019
Last Updated on April 20, 2019
Tags: Humanity, Blocks

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