Hazy Days

Hazy Days

A Poem by Neetha
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Foggy haze

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April's been a blur
The days fused into nothingness
And Time's suddenly insignificant.

Lived like a zombie
Made through the days in a haze
Numbness, my constant companion.

Until one day,

the lethargy ballooned out of proportion
Got tired of its weak abode
And finally left my body

In search of a better home.

© 2020 Neetha


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Neetha
Penning down after a long time...

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This should be your come-back poem. Glad to see you after long time and a warm welcome to you.
Last three lines created a magic but good to see that a talented kids puts altogether so dense and deep writing pieces which leaves a certain impression. A catchy short write.

Posted 4 Days Ago


Neetha

3 Days Ago

Haha, thank you. Glad to read that.
All the days run into one another, After awhile everything feels the same. I think you set the mood beautifully.

Posted 6 Days Ago


Neetha

5 Days Ago

Thank you so much. Glad to read you words:)
Zeref

5 Days Ago

Pleasure is mine
you was in the moment with the universe

Posted 1 Week Ago


Neetha

6 Days Ago

Thank you! Being in sync with the universe, thats such a deep feeling. Your crisp words mean a lot.
 wordman

6 Days Ago

you`re welcome
It explains clearly what happens in summer to us. It also conveys that being carefree is good and laziness can too sometimes be enjoyed. Its inspiring short and beautiful read. Amazingly written and even though its short. It completes what it started. Great and appriciable

Posted 1 Week Ago


Neetha

6 Days Ago

Thank you. Yah, being carefree is good:) Glad to hear you liked it.
almost like an out of body experience. This whole covid experience...
it is like being in a state of inertia...and never getting out of it...
maybe after awhile, even if we could, we may not want to...
it may become a part of us.
j.

Posted 1 Week Ago


Neetha

1 Week Ago

Exactly. The new normal is gonna be challenging. Thanks for the read:)
This whole thing since mid-March has been a surreal experience ... Time literally has slowed and merged into a blur of days that can only be identified by the weather it seems.
I'm sure that after a while, the sense of sameness who produce depression in anyone. Imagine if they are not able to express themselves through writing. Pity.

This is a great piece of writing Neetha.
Take care ... stay safe

Posted 1 Week Ago


Neetha

1 Week Ago

I agree, its both a shock and a learning experience. And yes, writing helps a lot. Glad to hear from.. read more
April is a slow month. Rainy days and too much time to think. I do understand these words dear Neetha. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 1 Week Ago


Neetha

1 Week Ago

You are always such a delight to hear from. Thanks for the kind words. And yes, time seems slow now.
Coyote Poetry

1 Week Ago

Hello dear Neetha and you are welcome.
This one is inspired by either the stress of the pandemic or a bout of depression. Somehow, I suspect it is the latter.

Posted 1 Week Ago


Neetha

1 Week Ago

You got it right there. Its actually a mix of both. Quarantine blues. Writing is a good way to relie.. read more
This have very nice light mood even end of the poem can means end of the life. I like that hope maybe there is something to better after this life experience. It's very sublime and I like it.

Posted 1 Week Ago


Neetha

1 Week Ago

Happy to hear you liked it:)
And yes, poems are open to interpretation. I am happy people can.. read more

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Added on June 28, 2020
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Neetha
Neetha

Kerala, India



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