Two Faced.

Literally just wrote this. Apparently, I get motivated to write when I am sitting in my car haha.

Rolling, down and down.
Round and round.
Jittery fingers fumble.
They tumble as greedy eyes praise.
They raise the sun, they hate the tan.
They feed in culture but heed on nurture.
All things are from nature.
Do all things have a future?
The sun is warm as we bathe in its light.
We say goodbye to the night
And all of its shadowy plights.
We flee from what’s right.
The power of words are thin and cutting like swords.
“Help me” their eyes plead
As they bleed from their chains.
Weighted for eternity
Waiting to be seen and picked like it’s a fraternity.
Life...life drips. Drips. Drips in crimson.
Like the drop of sanity.
Vanity is a pain.
From the ego and eyes there’s distain.
In vain I decree that everyone sees glee.
A face full of laughs but eyes full of loath.
Double edge, double dose.

Two faced

Now they’re comatose.
Catatonic from their disease.
Their stench loud like a sneeze.
No amount of febreze can cover their odor.
As they walk around like ogres.
Eating and ripping mankind.
The differences of them and you strike.
The sky collapsed and their minds sizzled.
Dazzled by their “beauty” as they mimic something they hated.
Mimes they are. “Victims” they are.
First they are. Right they are.
Accepted they are. Loved they are.

Two Faced.

Reviews

[adichie]

Loved what you had to say about the look in the eyes of the two-faced in this world. Got me thinking...

And the power of words... what kinds of words do people choose with nothing but self where the heart should be?

Your ending, showing the mimes up for the frauds they are, just lights the fuse...those backstabbers had better run!!! 😃😃

Thank you for writing this.

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[Nefertiti Virtudes Ahmes]

Thank Deb for your review and kind words!! I am in love with your insight!! You always have good things to add.

[Pól]

very good,,,,,,,,,, no,actually its excellent

[Nefertiti Virtudes Ahmes]

Thank you very much!!!

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The two faced brigade....those ultimate fake people and the following sheep types that adore them.....we have all met people like this. It seems the world is full of such people; schools, colleges, workplaces....they are everywhere. Best to be avoided in my experience.

I enjoyed the flow of thoughts here; a cascading of quiet bitterness and simmering hatred for those that charm you to your front and stab you in your back. Time to invest in chainmail! Nice work.

[Nefertiti Virtudes Ahmes]

Thank you for your review and kind words!!

Haha, “The two faced brigade” love this!!