You

You

A Poem by Nena
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Love shows you the importance of each day that you pass.

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I sleep thinking about You,
Still finding No absolute clue.
Of how I got to be so Lucky,
With your presence lingering in a charming way.
I wonder if there's something to worry about now.
The morning light arrives with a new way of life,
Alongwith the truth that its' morning dews still remind Me of You.

© 2014 Nena


Author's Note

Nena
Am quite raw but I love writing short poems and sometimes long paragraphs so if there are mistakes, do let me know :)

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The morning light arrives with a new way of life,
Alongwith the truth that its' morning dews still
remind Me of You.

This is very beautiful poetry, but for my thinking rough too. It's like someone not sure about love or more than love. Love this.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nena

6 Years Ago

Thankyou :) and I know my lines are rough, I'll do better the next time.
Saddam

6 Years Ago

Why? You are done best and I think that is best of you.
Nena

6 Years Ago

Oh thankyou :)



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The morning light arrives with a new way of life,
Alongwith the truth that its' morning dews still
remind Me of You.

This is very beautiful poetry, but for my thinking rough too. It's like someone not sure about love or more than love. Love this.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nena

6 Years Ago

Thankyou :) and I know my lines are rough, I'll do better the next time.
Saddam

6 Years Ago

Why? You are done best and I think that is best of you.
Nena

6 Years Ago

Oh thankyou :)
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Pi
It's a really lovely poem :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Nena

6 Years Ago

Thankyou! :)
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ron
This is romantic and very sweet. I like how it reads.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nena

6 Years Ago

Thankyou :)
ron

6 Years Ago

Your very welcome :)
Nena ,gud one ...I like it very much ...ur thoughts are clear through ur word....
One thing more the last line u have written
It's better to break it into 2 line. Btw nice one ...keep writing

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nena

6 Years Ago

Thankyou Utkarsh! :) and yep you're probably right about the last lines. Will take a note of it :)
This is slightly rough to read, and a good way to tell if it's smooth is to read it out loud.
BUT I got a complete sense of what you were saying and trying to convey, and that in itself was raw and beautiful. The structure just needs some working on.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nena

6 Years Ago

I know :) and I'll try to make it better the next time. Thankyou anyway!

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Silchar, North-East, India



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