Lights Out

Lights Out

A Poem by Nena
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There's a little bit of sadness in the right decisions, a bit of regret for those times. And when you're alone, you try to find the light in the dark.

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The moon is shining bright up in the sky.
And now, I just want to remember you for a while.
Softness of the wind brings back all those memories again.
For once again now, I wonder if I were insane?
Tears won't fall all the time,
But that doesn't means True Love still can't climb.
Above all those miseries and disappointments,
You still linger on those high-shelfs.
Words are many but none so worth any,
To tell you how it felt when you left.
This Heart can tell many stories but it only finds 'ours' True to tell.
When you're near, all these emotions come out for real.
Darkness surrounds me all the time,
Even though I know your still mine.
Light can break into the dark hours but for now, It feels all Lights are out.

© 2014 Nena


Author's Note

Nena
This one was for a friend who went through a heartbreak. So, I tried to pen down her feelings. Hope I make sense.

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This was unique and especial...sorry for your loss

Posted 6 Years Ago


Nena

6 Years Ago

Thankyou :)
A. Amos

6 Years Ago

You're most welcome
A very comfortable poem.

Favorite bits:
"I just want to remember you for a while"
"Words are many but none so worth any"
"It feels all Lights are out"

I recommend reading through this again. You are missing a few small connecting words .

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nena

6 Years Ago

Thankyou :) and yeah I know I do miss some words. I'll try to improve that.
i undersatnd her feeling ...nice one ...........

Posted 6 Years Ago


Nena

6 Years Ago

Thankyou for the read! :)
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ron
You described the feelings oh heart break very well. Nicely done.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Nena

6 Years Ago

And thanks for reading! Thankyou :)
ron

6 Years Ago

You are most welcome :)

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Added on April 26, 2014
Last Updated on April 26, 2014
Tags: Love, sadness, regret

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Silchar, North-East, India



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