We are Forever

We are Forever

A Poem by Kristine

In your eyes there is

A light I’ve seen before

It glows like a flame

Whispering softly

We are forever

Even as the body withers

And slowly turns to dust

The light in your eyes

I will see again

Every time I see you

I will know

That it is you

I will feel

That it is you

Your heart always beats

Inside my chest

As my heart always beats

Inside your chest

Your light will always be the same

We are forever

© 2012 Kristine

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it started off really Grait!! But it needs something bothersome to much repetition perhaps I can understand why you use it,its just from a reader perspective after the second verse of feeling the straight flow it slows down maby like your heart beat :) that's all I have to say but Grait wright :)

Posted 9 Years Ago

Carl Drake Barnard

9 Years Ago

Awesome glad I could help!! You have so much potential,you have a crafty-arty way of right I enjoy l.. read more

9 Years Ago

aww, thank you! that's very kind of you :)
Carl Drake Barnard

9 Years Ago

just being honest :) and I enjoy your work,brings,closure I think hmm :)

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Added on August 26, 2012
Last Updated on August 26, 2012
Tags: Forever, poem, poetry, love, flame




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