Crash

I'm trying to get rid of writer's block, so enjoy! (This may be a story!)

I gripped the edge of the seat ready to face the impact when it hit. It felt like 10 cement blocks hit me. I gasped for air as my head smacked the dashboard. The world spun in twirls before everything went hazy. I felt a liquid creep down my forehead and on to the corners of my mouth. I slowly took my last breath and the world went black.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[MusicLover]

I love the details. it sounds like I was there in the place of the charecter. sorry i dont have spell check therfore it sucks xD.

Amazing details. You should add another part

Very nice! Micro-fiction is difficult! I've been trying to write some myself, but its so hard for me to stay under 100 words...

[Laurynn Fuentes c:]

This is BEAUTIFULLLLL, OLIVIA! But, I know that this was to get rid of writers block, but you should've described where you were going or what you were doing before the impact hit you.
You're getting better at writing every day hunn c: