Great and proud howls the wind

Great and proud howls the wind

A Poem by Nerio
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An exercise of style in English poetry. Please, feel free to let me know your critic opinion

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Great and proud howls the wind! 
No human god could louder sing, 
no mortal soul might ever lean 
over such mighty heavens unseen. 


So desperately we live and die 
for a touch of that remote sky, 
a piece of hope, a pleasant lie, 
Anything that could push us high. 


Into the mud we strive and scream, 
fighting for glories or noble dreams, 
in the end going down the same stream 
of tears and blood, no pain to redeem. 


And yet indifferent to all comes the wind! 
No bright angel could merryer sing, 
no human hand might ever bring 
such sweet peace to our bitter scene

© 2020 Nerio


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I think that howling into the wind releases and brings great strength and surrender. I like this as it reminds me not to be so human. Thank you for the share and the reminder.

ps. Is it merrier?

Posted 2 Months Ago



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