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Just something from a daughter of the Lord*. *Lord= Ra/ the Pagan god for the Sun.

I am His daughter,

One of few that are left.

I shall carry this title with great honor,

But Father?

Shall I ever get to see your face

Or hear your voice again?

How I long to be home with you,

Safe and warm again.

I know you watch over me everyday,

Trying to help as much as you can.

I just wish I knew if I serve you well.

Even more so,

I wish I could know if when I come home to you,

Will you welcome me with an embrace

Or will you show the same level of coldness to my friends?

Reviews

[Yasmin]

It would be unfair to say that I fully understand it I mean it feels that they is more to it than what you have written but either way it is passionate and honest shows the real conflict between your emotions and your thoughts
It has been very long since I last read for you and I cant read wait to read more
Great job
and it would be a pleasure if you visit my profile :)

[Stephen]

~~Beautiful poem~~

Too many emotions and love I find in this write .. you`ve expressed your real emotions via words, I liked this poem. I`m going to look forward to reading your some more beautiful poems!

[Neshie]

Thank you very much. I hope to have something soon.

[A. Amos]

This was written by heart and was simply amazing

[Neshie]

Thank you.

[A. Amos]

you're most welcome