The 5 questions

The 5 questions

A Poem by Ness of Love
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These 5 I wonder all the time about, and I know that I'm not the only one who wonders.

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“Who?”
You are the who
The who in my heart
The who in my head
The who in my dreams
The who who is my world.

“What?”
What happened?
What made you go?
What needs to be done?
What can I do?
What can help you to not leave me?

“When?”
When did you go?
I cant seem to remember when
When was a long time ago
It was when you left me broken
When love disappeared forever.

“Where?”
Everyone wants to know where
Where did you go?
Where did you have the time?
This where is to far away
Where am I without you?

“Why?”
Why did you leave?
I want to know why
Want to know why you did what you did
You know why, but I don’t
I at least want to know why I ever loved you……

© 2011 Ness of Love


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I super loved the last line. I think it was a good way to end the poem. You raised a lot of relatable questions. This was an intriguing and captivating read. Thanks for sharing. ;)

Posted 9 Years Ago


wow. that was powerful and different. i've never seen a piece like this before, and i really enjoyed it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


this is awesome, I saw this as a favorite from Dark Promises, and this is awesome, Hello Ness of Love I am BABy

Posted 10 Years Ago


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