Back to you

Back to you

A Poem by Ness of Love

The first true love will always remain a love

First loves make big impacts,
I know you did to me,
When you left I wasn’t fazed,
But I never knew that I couldn’t escape ye.

So young when you left,
We weren’t even out of school,
Then little Liam transferred in,
And he seemed like the perfect tool.

I feel for him head on,
And it took me a while,
But this affection was only for one reason,
And that was for the smile.

Behind the smile though was not good,
You were just like every other,
I dropped you like a brick,
In search for another

Dylan was next,
Only because he was funny,
But that was a mistake,
For I always was hurt when he called her Honey.

They all had that something,
Drew with the blonde hair,
Drake with the blue eyes,
And not to forget Xavier with memories that we share.

I gave up on them all,
Not ever knowing why,
Then one day it came,
The answer that fell from the sky.

Rain slid down my face with the tears,
When I realized the truth,
They all reminded me of him,
Which led me to cry with much uncouth.

To this day I haven’t seen him,
I need to tell him what’s true,
I need to find him quickly,
Before someone else to him says ‘I love you.’

© 2011 Ness of Love

Author's Note

Ness of Love
I still haven't told him how I feel, and I don't think I can truly move on until I do. I don't want people to make the same mistake I did, so this may sound mushy, but tell him how you feel.

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wow such a deep heartfelt piece, it's gripping and touching as well.

Posted 9 Years Ago

Oh wow, I love this poem! It's got the rhythm that I like, it flows, and it simple tells of how you feel without too much masking and metaphors. It's fantastic, thanks!

Posted 9 Years Ago

I like this idea of the first love. Not only is it important to tell them how you feel for them to know, but it's also important for you to move on if that's what ends up happening. thank you :)

Posted 9 Years Ago

This is incredibly relateable, and quite heartfelt. Bravo.

Posted 10 Years Ago

You tease my lovely...

Posted 10 Years Ago

i agree with 13ReasonsWhy. anyways, i really liked this. relatable. it flowed nicely and it was just awesome.

Posted 10 Years Ago

tell him. it'll clear your heart. i know you may doubt yourself, the impact to your relationship, and your ability to do so, but forget all of that and tell him... he needs to know. what if hes feeling the same? :)) love knows no bounds, girl. :))

Posted 10 Years Ago

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7 Reviews
Added on December 19, 2011
Last Updated on December 19, 2011
Tags: first, true, love, just, like, you, smile, hair, eyes


Ness of Love
Ness of Love


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