Love

Love

A Poem by 0tulissa
"

Yup.

"

Bittersweet

Harsh

Unrelenting

He was everything to me.

Blue"he says sapphire"eyes

Like the Hope diamond

Basking in starlight.

 

Twisting, curling,

Golden wheat hair.

So difficult not to

Reach over and run my fingers through.

 

Gorgeous tinkling laughter

Made me laugh too.

So perfect, so flawless.

Everything to me.

 

How do I tell him after such a long time?

How?

We barely know each other

Though he looks exactly the same.

 

I love him.

He’s everything.

 

But how do I say what I’ve been hiding

 

Forever?

© 2010 0tulissa


Author's Note

0tulissa
Yup.

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I'll agree with you Breq: yup. I can't exactly...I don't know--it's just so pretty!!!! btw, the awesome review is not only 'cause you're my best friend, it actually is an, well, awesome poem. I use awesome a lot, and I'm rambling, I'm going to shut up now. :D

P.S. nothing is going to turn out perfectly, no matter HOW hard you try. Nothing/no one's perfect.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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This is really really interesting! and soooooooooooo romantic I love this!! :-)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I'll agree with you Breq: yup. I can't exactly...I don't know--it's just so pretty!!!! btw, the awesome review is not only 'cause you're my best friend, it actually is an, well, awesome poem. I use awesome a lot, and I'm rambling, I'm going to shut up now. :D

P.S. nothing is going to turn out perfectly, no matter HOW hard you try. Nothing/no one's perfect.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

really sweet work! i believe i can relate to this. but its so intimidating!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

awe, seems like you're having a crush...
hurm, how about tell him how you feel?
I know you're nervous to do so but it's better than to let your feelings being hang up this way...

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love it. It's awesome. Keep going Asura-san!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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