SAD

SAD

A Poem by Neville

 

 

SAD

Why so sad

My little one?

The laughter lines

Have all but gone

I promise

You need never be

Alone again

 

 

 

© 2013 Neville


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It is amazing to me how you can say so much with so little words, but that is how good you are! The emotion within and the hope in the end, at first the word sad made me think of why? But the laughter lines are there to show that is so very possible to be happy...and we are never really alone ;-)

Well done dear :-))))

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Years Ago

How very kind .. many huge thank you's my friend ..

:)
Silmara McGarry

2 Years Ago

You are most welcome my friend :-)



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It is amazing to me how you can say so much with so little words, but that is how good you are! The emotion within and the hope in the end, at first the word sad made me think of why? But the laughter lines are there to show that is so very possible to be happy...and we are never really alone ;-)

Well done dear :-))))

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Years Ago

How very kind .. many huge thank you's my friend ..

:)
Silmara McGarry

2 Years Ago

You are most welcome my friend :-)
If words were made of glass, these would need be held with utmost care. Such a tender poem. Tis good to see you posting again, Neville.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Years Ago


how your words do make one wonder .. fragile is as fragile be ... I cannot understand why my.. read more
Your ability to put so much in so few lines is always astounding to me! I promise I will smile more brother Nev:)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Years Ago


.... That'll do nicely, very nicely indeed my friend :)
your poor poem Nev!!! so very small and standing so alone on the page ;) ... "The laughter lines Have all but gone" ... man! that is sad ... unless someone has gone in for some skin stretching :)) .. powerful sadness emoted and i love the closing .. as a Father may speak to a child .. reborn .. and i can not help but notice that "Sad" is in the form of an egg .... you are brilliant whether subconsciously or not says i! yes .. the old one's lines are erased ... and he (i see him as a he) is reborn .. and in a much better place. a real gem there my friend!
E.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Years Ago


.. you are way too kind my friend .. but then I do so like it ............ N :)
An old poem out for an airing Neville. First of all I thought of a conversation with a child, but laughter lines don't start forming until adulthood. No, this is for a grown up who might be little in stature. Promises can be a great comfort when healing rifts. There was comfort here. That's where this little poem took me. Endearing it was too.

Chris

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

3 Years Ago


there's certainly nowt wrong with ya eyes Chris .. it seems you can read write through me .... read more
Chris Shaw

3 Years Ago

Nah! More luck than judgement, you are a dark horse. Good morning Neville.:)
This was such a sweet little poem, Neville :) The feeling of loneliness can send someone into a deep spiral of depression, you just need to let them know that you're there for them and that you love them, this was an endearing little poem, and was short but sweet. :) Thank you for sharing.

Kindly, Nix ❤️️

Posted 3 Years Ago


What depth to these few words - A sure comfort for anyone who when being alone gives way to fears - - young or of mature years these lines when read aloud will truly arouse and secure a smile........ a loving write my friend.........x

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

3 Years Ago


.................then I thank you no end my very fine friend :)
Comforting and sweet, this poem is just so lovely. LydI**

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

3 Years Ago


................ just what the doctor ordered .. bless you dear Lydi** ... So good to have y.. read more
a hundred 100 dear Neville! honestly I am amazed how these few lines spoke with that emotive voice, I can't but think of a child as the "little one" for that it touched me even more...

never You are alone, the laughter lines still "linger" here. Smile***

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

3 Years Ago


thank you kindly and true dear friend ...
:)
Being alone can make people feel sad but once you get comfortable with yourself being alone isn’t as miserable as you think but on the flip side we all need someone at some point whether it be friend or family.

This short poem made me have some deep thoughts

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

3 Years Ago

It’s a good deep thought provoking poem
Neville

3 Years Ago


..................... then I thank thee deeply
Poetic Beauty

3 Years Ago

You are most welcome

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