My Lady Pleases Me This Way

My Lady Pleases Me This Way

 

Sitting alone

In her lacquered chair

Panties and blouse

Typing out old poems

Her blonde hair

Catching the sun

Biting her lip

Occasionally sucking on 

A French cigarette

And sighing

I don’t know why

My lady pleases me this way

Reviews

[barleygirl]

What I love the most about your word portrait is that your appreciation covers things both beautiful & not so much. To me, the most loveable characters are the ones with shining points mingled with flaws, which you've conveyed in a loving way. Your lady is most appreciated & I'm guessing she's appreciating in return! *smile* Fondly, Margie

[Neville]

I really can't thank you enough Margie for your expressed opinion on these words of mine. This was originally conceived over 35 years ago.....N

[Chris Shaw]

She pleases you because she is so natural in your presence. Half dressed typing up her poems, sunlight on her hair. It paints a wonderful picture of her being totally relaxed and doing what she wants to do with you looking on, immersed in the scene. You love her for her whole being and that comes through beautifully. Lovely poem Neville.

[Neville]

you are far too kind and generous, but nevertheless much appreciated..... N

[Chris Shaw]

I relate what I feel when I read you. This came across that she had no airs or graces, she was completely being herself.

[Neville]

she would have loved to hear that and true...

[Chris Shaw]

Reminds me a bit of what I am like with my poetry. When the muse is there, everything else goes out the window. I understand the half dressed part. lol

[Neville]

mind riot runs....

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Your love light shines upon her Neville. Your lovely lady of letters...your eloquent imagery defines her and your words adore her. You immortalize her- just being herself. That is just as it should always be between true lovers. Bravo, Neville!

[Neville]

and you Annette are far too kind for words.... Neville

[lightsong]

oh oh oh! I do know why she does! please You this way! I love THIS so much dear Neville, You've captured a moment of real allure, real temptation, and the truth Your title and the end what makes it even more amazing! the helpless hopeless tender lost of You within her charms~~~~

[Neville]

you are far too kind and generous, but I do like it... thank you so much.... N

[lightsong]

You deserve it my friend, I really like this one!

[lightsong]

specially "typing out old poems" ;)

[Neville]

my cup runneth over.... thanks again....

[Kelly Scheppers]

I'm jealous. I wish a man would write about me like this. Such beautiful expressions, Neville!

[Neville]

If they have not already, I am sure they will....thank you Kelly...Neville

[Tom]

Well even if you don't, I sure do!! lol.. very pleasing on the eye Neville, I see you haven't lost your touch my friend!!

[Neville]

You as always, are far too generous by half...but I like it.... Cheers Tom and so glad you are back mate.... Neville

[Phill Oz O'fee]

A delightful daydream tribute to the 'Poetess’ of your reverie … the stanza flow and word play just oozes your admiration! Nice one …

[Neville]

Thank you Phil much appreciated and yep although a very long time ago now, still remembered... Neville

[Debbie Barry]

Then sensual vulnerability of the typist of old poems is wonderful. The details of the chair and cigarette create an image of taste and money. The emotion while typing reminds me of my own reaction to the past emotions of my old poems, and I feel like the lady would understand me, just a little. I like this.

[Neville]

Thank you so very much Debbie, your time and consideration of this old poem of mine is very much appreciated....Neville

[Debbie Barry]

You're welcome.

[Lydia Shutter]

WOW, quite the portrait you paint with your words here, Neville. I could see her and I could see YOU watching her. Wonderful. Lydi**

[Neville]

I am by now, well & truly indebted to you Lydi, & take it from me, wows are rare in my book WOW's in particular..............Many thanks, N

[Mrudula Rani]

I can see clearly this image on Norman Rockwell's canvas! - Mrudula

[Neville]

That is so very kind of you my friend, cheers, I will drink to that....N

[Mrudula Rani]

Cheers!- Mrudula