I Built a Little House

Just a little fancy.........

I Built a Little House

 

I built a little house

My dove

Atop a cherry tree

I built it out of solid oak

and nails

Just for you and me…

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Sometimes when ya get an idea, don't you just have to run with it, or fly.......o...N

Reviews

[Norman 223]

A tree house, or a love nest, It still generated a high ideal.
Norman

[Neville]

Not telling Norm, but hey, thank you so much for checking in..... Neville

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Awwww, so sweet and tender Neville...love the ‘love’ of it. Lyrical, flowing, lovely rhythm, rhyme and musicality sooooooo......please write some more of it!!

[Neville]

Bless you Annette, maybe one day I will take you up on that very kind suggestion....... AGT's... Neville

[sette]

awesome poem my friend building the house with own bare hands too much love exists

[Neville]

I exaggerated just a tiny little bit...but hey, thank you sette......Neville

[sette]

my pleasure my friend

[Einstein Noodle]

hmmmmm solid oak and nails!!! a secure love nest or prison it could be ;))))))))))) high up in the trees :) don't you just love tree houses and forts my friend?!!!!!! very enjoyable read for me... short, impactful and inspiring of all kinds of things!
E.

[Neville]

Cor blimey my friend, I never thought of it like that, but now as you have mentioned it, maybe a couple of machine gun posts strategically sited might improve the security......Cheers.... Neville

[Einstein Noodle]

ahahaha we do love our guns eh!? ;)))) and Cheers to you sir...i will raise my "beer a day" to you today my friend!

[Neville]

And I to thee, down yer neck buddy............N

[Einstein Noodle]

:)....................

[Neville]

:).................. back at'cha.........

[Einstein Noodle]

i am going to steal your toast.."down yer neck buddy" ... and use it the very next time i tip one with friends ..love it!! i had not heard it before :)

[Neville]

Quintessentially English .......

[Ms Paragon]

Lovely image,a self- created world just for two!Short and to the point!Well done!

[Neville]

Well blow me down, that was very kind Ms Paragon, thank you...... Nevile

[Kelly Scheppers]

A safe haven built for two, to keep the world at bay! How lovely, indeed!

[Neville]

It does have a certain appeal in this busy old world of ours... thank you dear Kelly.......neville

[Ana Papaya]

my love of tree houses has me picturing such a beautiful scene here. a happy one.
i love this poem.

[Neville]

You are far to kind, many thanks though, your words are truly encouraging and appreciated...... Neville

[Samuel Dickens]

It's a sweet idea turned into a sweet poem. Bird or human, I'd like to live in that little house atop the cherry tree.

[Neville]

Thank you so much Samuel tis a nice idea, I must confess............................N

[Mrudula Rani]

Your built the perfect little house for a pair of love birds!
What a romantic soul you have my friend!

[Neville]

Funny, I've been getting all sorts of tweets about that... Thank you for the fly past...... Neville

[Cherrie Palmer]

How all dreams start and in the end return

[Neville]

Of course, you are quite write Cherrie and thank you so much for the visit......Neville