No Hint of an End

No Hint of an End

A Poem by Neville
"

everyone needs a safe place

"
No Hint of An End

These words have no 
Beginning but they 
Bounce and echo loud
Around the labyrinths 
Of the same shell
They were first
Imprisoned in long ago
Fine words 
They are too...

And when
Whispered soft
Might be mistaken
For the sea and wind
Mouthing and teasing
Her wild golden
Finger combed hair
Brushed back and yes
Still damp and salty...

My lady once lived
For such poetry
Yet she would lay there
Hardly breathing
Just in case the spell
Got broken
Then on waking fully
She would look up and see
Through a perfect
Ken Simm sky...

Twas then he felt her kiss
South of the nape
His neck did cry 
And she did crave
Gentle as the downward 
Thrust of lichen green
Lacewings wings
Passing them by
There in the cove of their
Safe and secret harbour...

Yes indeed for
That is where words 
Such as these
Go round and round
With not a single 
Hint of beginning
No sure sign of a middle
And no
No certain trace of an end even.... 

© 2019 Neville


Author's Note

Neville
dont everyone just wanna be loved

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You can tell Lydi that I do love it. Except for that one line which is to much. Honestly. I echo those feelings as well. We all do need a safe place. Just not under one of my skies. Actually I am honoured beyond belief. You rotter. I honestly didn't know about this.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Months Ago


and why should ya you old sausage .. I am nevertheless thrilled that you eventually stumbled.. read more
Ken Simm.

2 Months Ago

Oh bugger.



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"Ken Simm sky..." WOW Mr. MR. Neville... I am jealous of this and of "My Lady".... the whole poem is about "POETRY REALM" I so relate to this, the no hint of the beginning, or of the end... many many times my words are like this... they only float free, not sure what is the start of the poem or the end of it?! this so brilliant in my eyes, so beautiful and breathtaking... that verse of "My Lady..." well, we Poetesses should sigh there without a doubt :>

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lightsong

2 Months Ago

Truly deserved :>. lol I find my 2 years old review a bit odd, well I am an ODD Lady😂
Neville

2 Months Ago


but lovely with it ........................... 😂))
lightsong

2 Months Ago

You are truly kind to AN ODD LADY ........😂
You can tell Lydi that I do love it. Except for that one line which is to much. Honestly. I echo those feelings as well. We all do need a safe place. Just not under one of my skies. Actually I am honoured beyond belief. You rotter. I honestly didn't know about this.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Months Ago


and why should ya you old sausage .. I am nevertheless thrilled that you eventually stumbled.. read more
Ken Simm.

2 Months Ago

Oh bugger.
A lover's tangled hair; wet from the sea, fine white sand on brown skin, soft kisses in the summer sun. No ending to such things sounds rather sweet and filled with romance. Nicely done. I enjoyed the read.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Months Ago


in that case, not only am I well n truly delighted, but consider mission accomplished .. tha.. read more
I have been strongly inspired by Ken Simm's writing many times, so I can feel the connection between the more-effusive-than-usual aspects here and the way Ken writes. Truthfully, I go for more effusiveness from you . . . sometimes it feels like you're holding back or doling it out sparingly. I love it when you take a big deep dive, like you've done in this poem. Kinda orgasmic, to my way of thinking, the way you build up to a more & more personal seduction (((FROGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Years Ago

You just made this old geezers evening Margie.. ta and more muchly than you might ever imagine.. FRO.. read more
It is not a difficult task to love you Nev not in the least my friend! A perfect Simm sky I caught glimpse once or twice:) some very endearing lines in here Nev!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Years Ago

wot a bloomin lovely thing to say... cheers n all that jazz Robert... my day is made and its only po.. read more
Very well written, and even if someone doesn't say it, they do want love. Nicely done.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Years Ago

Thank you Allie... :)
Romance at its highest, blending and breathing with and in Poetry, exactly as two lovers blending and breathing as one, not exactly knowing how it started nor where it's the end, only enjoying the moment they have now, the way You began, and how You ended it with the last verse, the "smart" Poet is whom You are ;)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Years Ago

what a very kind thing to say my friend.. thank you for your ongoing support and encouragement... N .. read more
Ken Simm.....He will love this one for sure. We all need a safe place...a person we trust with our heart and soul. One we can read our poetry to and know it will not be judged harshly, but for the emotions between the lines. When the beginning, middle, and end all lead to the same place, it is a good one. Lydi**

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Years Ago

Thank you kindly and ever so muchly Lydi**
are you sure we are separated by an ocean coz if n.. read more
Lydia Shutter

2 Years Ago

Awwww, you are a sweetie. Thanks, Neville.
Neville

2 Years Ago

............ :)
Fine words they are too, Neville, great sentiment, and a tender touch,

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Years Ago

thank you kindly, your visit here is very much appreciated... Neville
such words should always encircle the soul, a lovely piece.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Years Ago

Many thanks Cherrie....

Neville

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